You recently had your computer fixed at a local computer store. However, you are not pleased with the service which you received.
Write a letter to the store manager.
In the letter,
-Describe the situation.
-Explain why you are dissatisfied
-Say what you want the manager to do.
Respected Manager,
I had step in your store one week ago. My computer was giving some problem while i was working on it. Whenever i start my computer, it again and again ask for rebooting. I handed over my computer to your staff for the repair and got the service request number too. On the very next day, your staff member called me that computer is fine and you can pick it from our office.
Yesterday, i went to your office and collected my computer from your office. After reaching home, i arranged and attached all the components of it. It was working fine for some hours but again it asked for rebooting. As i reboot my computer, screen starts showing "Windows got corrupted". Now, i am not able to even reboot my computer. Again, i visited your store for the complaint but the person at reception did not respond well at all. He said that we handed over your computer in running state so you need to be paid for the service again.
First of all, i want that the person who is attending the customers should be given training that how to deal with them. Secondly, i had paid for the services at your office. So, it is your responsibilty to provide me computer in error free state and this time it should be done free of cost.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... computer was giving some problem while i was working on it. Whenever i start my ...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lem while i was working on it. Whenever i start my computer, it again and again a...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... pick it from our office. Yesterday, i went to your office and collected my co...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... from your office. After reaching home, i arranged and attached all the component...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rs but again it asked for rebooting. As i reboot my computer, screen starts showi...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...'Windows got corrupted'. Now, i am not able to even reboot my computer....
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...able to even reboot my computer. Again, i visited your store for the complaint bu...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...or the service again. First of all, i want that the person who is attending t...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g that how to deal with them. Secondly, i had paid for the services at your offic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, secondly, so, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52136752137 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49917803713 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1790463481 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.125 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208227953873 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753320472664 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730496830366 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131607561617 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297193145091 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.