You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable.
Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter:
give details about the order you made
explain what was wrong with the item
tell the company what you want them to do about it
Dear Sir/Ma’am,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction on the purchase I made on your E-Commerce website named Bags.com. I ordered a “Lavie” Sling bag in Yellow colour. In the product description it was mentioned that the bag is made from Leather but I received a bag which looks like made out of fake leather material and the colour is also faded.
The Order number is 24567 and Payment was made by my PayTm account.
I regret to tell you that I am completely disappointed with the product I received. I got the delivery on time but the product is not as it was shown and described in your website so I am assuming the manufacturing flaw here.
I would request you to replace the Product as I did not receive the genuine product. In case the sling bag is not available in the said material I would request you to provide me a full refund for my purchase.
You can refund the cost either in the original mode of payment or you can transfer the money in my bank account.
I am attaching the details of my bank account along with the Order Summary and Invoice.
I am hoping a prompt action from you in this matter!
Thank You!
Your Faithfully,
Kanchan Sagar
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...merce website named Bags.com. I ordered a 'Lavie' Sling bag in Yellow ...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Bags.com. I ordered a 'Lavie' Sling bag in Yellow colour. In the produ...
^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...assuming the manufacturing flaw here. I would request you to replace the Produc...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62790697674 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82082957699 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0250272496 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4545454545 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203816334012 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853388750183 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453462739591 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892669966136 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392974752806 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.