You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.Write a letter to

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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participants liked about the hotel
Explain why they were unhappy about the food
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to inform about the services we received on 27th December 2018, during a daylong meeting held at your hotels’ conference area.

My team who also attended the meeting has greatly appreciated the friendliness of the staff, the promptness of the services and the pleasant environment that they have received. In addition, the decor and cleanliness of the hotel was impressive.

However, we were disappointed in the quality of the food served. The food was cold and few mentioned there was slight pungent smell in some of the items. The chicken fry that was provided with the menu was very spicy, which overpowered the actual flavors of the food.

I suggest that you have the head chef inspect the food served before being served to the customers. Though I am not a chef, I personally recommend asking the customers preference about the levels of spiciness as there would be many, like me, who has less tolerance to spicy food.

I would be interested to hear about the action you think about this. Thank you in anticipation of your consideration in this matter.

Yours faithfully,
Annie

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to inform about the ...
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...ood was cold and few mentioned there was slight pungent smell in some of the item...
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...oned there was slight pungent smell in some of the items. The chicken fry that was provid...
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...chef, I personally recommend asking the customers preference about the levels of spicines...
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...on in this matter. Yours faithfully, Annie
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99476439791 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76589480335 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628272251309 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0995702791 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7272727273 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247186833961 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808676324149 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262953116214 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116773675524 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246450998963 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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