You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter,
Describe the party and how it went.
Explain why you were pleased with the hotel’s service.
Suggest some improvements that the hotel could make.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to give you some feedback after the party that my company recently held at your hotel. Actually, it is our 10th annuasury party which was organized as a red carpet event.
First of all, I would like to thank your hotel’s service because they provide admirable service to succeed our party such as they help to decorate and arrange tables and chairs, put on new red carpet on the floor and they offer excellent waiter service to our staff.
Finally, I would like to suggest some improvements to build up your hotel image among the society. The hotel lighting arrangements are not good for the night event. Therefore, if you can change it, is better to get more night functions to your hotel and also the air-conditions were not worked as properly.
All of us would like thank again you for given us such a memorable evening event and I will hope you are consider my suggestions to improve your service.
Thanks
Yours faithfully
mohan
Comments
Essay evaluation report
to succeed our party such as they help to decorate and arrange tables and chairs, put on new red carpet on the floor and they offer excellent waiter service to our staff.
Description: don't put a complete sentence after 'such as'
if you can change it, is better to get more night functions to your hotel and also the air-conditions were not worked as properly.
if you can change it, it is better to get more night functions to your hotel, and also the air-conditions were not working properly.
Sentence: Actually, it is our 10th annuasury party which was organized as a red carpet event.
Error: annuasury Suggestion: anniversary
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 171 250
No. of Characters: 773 1200
No. of Different Words: 108 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.616 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.52 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.38 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 44 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.499 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.41 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.704 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...conditions were not worked as properly. All of us would like thank again you for...
^^^
Line 8, column 106, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...e evening event and I will hope you are consider my suggestions to improve your service....
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tions to improve your service. Thanks Yours faithfully mohan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, if, so, therefore, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80588235294 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53433856703 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9787420816 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359614464258 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154202902898 0.0766984524023 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786044990939 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212819812277 0.12726935374 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878111617284 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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