You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1. say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
2. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
3. suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Ani,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of health. I have received your letter today and you have mentioned here that you are skeptical about whether to continue with higher studies or go for work. If you go by my way, I would rather suggest you to take at least a year off frok your routine academic curriculam and find a suitabke job.
As you are not sure about which decipline to take up for future, you may end up with wrong choice. Most of the time educational
curriculums are stuffed with may unnecessary topics, might not be enjoyable always.
Due to above facts, finding a suitable job would be the most beneficial for you. This will help you to save money for future studies. Further more, working experience will help you to brush up your knowledge and give extra weightage in your cv.
In addition, it is vital to select an appropriate field of work. I would suggest you to go through news paper, job websites for vacancies. As you have excellent communication skills and you love travelling, you can think of working with travelling agencies. tour guide, fight attendant.
I hope my advice will help you. Once you made your final decision let me know.
Best regards,
Aro
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ani, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ong choice. Most of the time educational curriculums are stuffed with may unneces...
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Line 6, column 77, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ecessary topics, might not be enjoyable always. Due to above facts, finding a suita...
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Line 10, column 100, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...work. I would suggest you to go through news paper, job websites for vacancies. As you hav...
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Line 10, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tour
...nk of working with travelling agencies. tour guide, fight attendant. I hope my ad...
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Line 12, column 33, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ant. I hope my advice will help you. Once you made your final decision let me kno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70422535211 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46869799533 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643192488263 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1299828208 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290628864235 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980257050933 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699395233594 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143919176685 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830524610967 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.