You recently took a trip to another city, and you had a plan to visit your friend who is living there. However, you couldn’t see him/her. Write a letter to your friend, and say
– Apologize for not being able to meet.
– Give your reasons.
– Suggest how you can meet some other time.
Hi Jakie,
I’m sorry that I couldn’t see you in my trip to Shiraz last week. I was going to come to the Atlas restaurant where we supposed meet each other that I received a call from my mother. She told me that my father had a hear attack and is in hospital. So I had to return back immediately to help my parents.
Fortunately my father is feeling better now and they will let him go home tomorrow and I’ll come back to Shiraz to continue my trip there. Nevertheless, due to this interruption in my trip I can’t see you this time, but I’ll be back to Shiraz in the mid of next month and we can meet then.
I hope you’re also available that time and we can spend even more time together as I have less work related tasks to do. Please let me know if you are free and we can see each other then.
See you,
Sorena.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aurant where we supposed meet each other that I received a call from my mother. S...
^^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... mother. She told me that my father had a hear attack and is in hospital. So I had to...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...told me that my father had a hear attack and is in hospital. So I had to return b...
^^
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...attack and is in hospital. So I had to return back immediately to help my parents. Fo...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 183, Rule ID: OTHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'other than'?
Suggestion: other than
...now if you are free and we can see each other then. See you, Sorena.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36809815951 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47993946303 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613496932515 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6902678657 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1111111111 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177756201357 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910505536616 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668354605419 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116128919322 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136036141247 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.