You recently went on a business trip to another country and you faced an issue at the
airport. Write a letter to the airport management and say
- What were the details of your flight?
- What was the problem at the airport?
- Give some suggestions for improvement.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this to bring to your attention the service issues faced during my recent flight from Mumbai to Perth. Along with my two of office colleagues, I flew 9W224, a non-stop flight, scheduled at 21:00 hrs local time from terminal 1. Considering it was international departure, we had reached at the airport well in advance.
Let me explain the problems I faced at the airport. To my utter surprise, there was only one queue for check in which was being used for domestic departures as well. Being a peak time and slow clearance of queue resulted in frustration and arguments between the passengers. To make condition worse, there was lot of hue and cry because of sudden influx of passengers due to delay in departure of earlier scheduled flights.
Would you kindly contemplate to arrange for multiple queues especially when you expect departures to me more than usual. This would not only save time of every person involved but also would better manage unexpected surge of people. In addition, passengers can be well informed to report early to avoid missing flights.
Thank you for your kind consideration.
Yours faithfully
Mohit Kumar
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07179487179 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70920703553 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697435897436 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3295105023 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4166666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222072959621 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795283750701 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672056749789 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131662348492 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397840002136 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.