On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of insurance company. In your letter
• Describe the item you lost
• Explain how you lost it
• Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention that I have lost my NIKON SDLR 221 Camera. It is a 20 Megapixel camera which was bought 4 months back for $ 650. It was during my recent holiday to Goa with my family when this incident occurred. Fortunately, I had purchased travel insurance (Plan 112) from your company to secure my belongings against such events.
Let me explain you how I lost the camera in detail. During my trip, there was an excursion planned at Fort Aguada and we were mandatorily asked to deposit our cameras at the entry check point since photography was prohibited. On return, I found that my camera pouch was inadvertently handed over to a different tourist of whom we had no contact details.
I would request you to kindly acknowledge this letter and let me know the next course of action to proceed. I have attached the copy of purchase invoice, proof of journey and visit to Fort Aguada for your kind consideration. Should you need any additional information, please let me know at your earliest convenience.
Thank you for your kind consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mohit Kumar
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Camera' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'camerae', 'cameras'.
Suggestion: Camerae; Cameras
...tion that I have lost my NIKON SDLR 221 Camera. It is a 20 Megapixel camera which was ...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$650'.
Suggestion: $650
...mera which was bought 4 months back for $ 650. It was during my recent holiday to Goa...
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Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion. Yours faithfully, Mohit Kumar
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88601036269 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80511372002 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683937823834 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8575568226 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5833333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.166666666667 4.34317383033 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208643148376 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835289562567 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850463522901 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126595570106 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02208288433 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.