Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
give details of when you would be available for this work
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reference to your advertisement on seeking volunteers to help at your hospital. Recently, I got free from my post graduate exams in dental surgery and I am very keen to work without any sort of pay/stipend at your hospital to use my available time in a productive manner. Capitalizing this opportunity, I firmly believe this is the golden chance to contribute and pay back to society as well.
Let me explain you in detail on the type of work I am knowledgeable enough to perform at your hospital. Considering my education background and relevant experience of 18 months, I confidently believe I would be able to assist in the first level of consultation for the tooth related complaints of the patients. In addition, I would be aptly suitable to assist the senior doctors in specialized root canal treatments which is relatively easier to perform as compared to other treatments.
I can be available from 10 -1 PM from Monday – Friday for next two months for voluntary work. Moreover, I can be available for emergencies during the weekend in the second half only. Kindly let me know if that would suit hospital’s requirements. Should you need any additional information, please do let me know at your earliest convenience.
Thank you for your kind consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mohit Kumar
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a productive manner" with adverb for "productive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04464285714 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17152861409 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633928571429 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6451820349 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1666666667 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33989755495 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11600946459 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866760727217 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190991824773 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278602412495 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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