You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very god. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter
say how you feel about his performance
give details of your musical activities
explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear Mr. Antony,
I am writing a letter to let you know that I had witnessed your performance to sing rap songs last night, and I have no hesitation to say that you are one of the best rap singers out of the rest who did perform on the stage.
Although, I have got a chance to listen to a plethora of rap singers in my career; however, the way you sang last night was outstanding. Besides, your energy level was pretty high which is necessary for a rap singer to get attention from the audience; therefore, every single person including myself enjoyed a lot while listening to your songs
Pleased to inform you that I am running a singer band called “Jazz” for the last couple of years where I have a team of a total of ten people including singers, drummers, and guitarists. I have organized over fifty concerts both domestically and internally, and have a good reputation among youngsters. However, I am very keen to have a rap singer in my team as a mentor who could train my young chaps to sing rap songs as these songs are getting popular day by day, so it would be much helpful for me to run my band successfully in the future.
Would it be possible for you to help me with the above-mentioned request?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53389830508 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71973170264 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588983050847 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.304501134 44.8134815571 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.857142857 76.5299724578 200% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7142857143 16.8248392259 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220974073849 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100901903886 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691592635748 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145639080469 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04405009182 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 8.37731958763 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.