You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter:
Say how you feel about his performance
Give details of your musical activities
Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities
Dear Abhijeet Samat,
I am a big fan of yours and I am writing this letter to express my emotions that I felt after attending your concert at ABC stadium on Oct 25th, 2021.
My name is Bina and I always wanted to hear you sing in-person. My wish was fulfilled when I saw you perform on the stage. I was completely blow away by your splendid voice and gorgeous personality. After you sang that song- I love you Julie, I got goose bumps all over my body and my heart raced profoundly.
Actually, I am a singer myself. I am just beginning my career. It will take me years of practice and hard work to each to your level. I have participated in a few singing competitions. Although I am a novice, I managed to win three medals. So I feel one day I can be as successful and accomplised as you are.
I need a favor from you. If you can take me under your mentorship, I can learn from you and develop my skills further. I can even join your team as a background singer if you feel I am capable enough.
I appreciate your taking the time to read my letter. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Bin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'blowed', 'blown'.
Suggestion: blowed; blown
... perform on the stage. I was completely blow away by your splendid voice and gorgeou...
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Line 11, column 54, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...your taking the time to read my letter. I look forward to hearing from you. Be...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23720930233 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55955985941 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5468841419 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.5882352941 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6470588235 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76470588235 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330599959339 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10414279166 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07626049987 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157065511567 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950931045578 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.42 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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