You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organisers. In your letter:
Explain why you are interested in helping
Give details suitable past experience
Suggest ways you might help with the event
Dear Sir,
Yesterday, I came across your advertisement of youngsters who could participate in a fund-raising event and I am writing to express my interest to be the part of your team.
The reason of my fascination to be the part of this event is the theme as I read in the same advert that this is going to be for the children with special needs. I would like to tell you that I love to be around children and if I would have a chance to assist you or them in any manner, it would be the most pleasurable act.
Besides my love for kids, I am a professional nanny, employed as a full-timer at Mary Childcare Centre. I have been part of this organization since 2018 while prior to that, I was volunteering in a school where disabled kids used to study. Thereby, I am well-versed with the manner of taking care of not only normal children but the special ones too.
In accordance to this, I was thinking that my experience and skill would be conducive in this event. I probably believe that handling and managing the children at event would be the best suited job for me as I am good at it. Even, I could lend my hand in food stall since I possess great culinary skills. Yet, whatever responsibility will be thrown towards me, I will complete that with utmost dedication.
Your prompt revert will be awaited by me.
Yours faithfully, 7th April,2021
Malisha Smith.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37450199203 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65052547864 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545816733068 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 251.0 16.3608247423 1534% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1098.0 76.5299724578 1435% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 251.0 16.8248392259 1492% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.0 4.34317383033 760% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0914349489056 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914349489056 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507669681538 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279392355442 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 124.7 8.37731958763 1489% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -166.37 70.7449484536 -235% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 98.8 7.45979381443 1324% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.55 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.17 7.59969072165 252% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 8.62886597938 637% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 102.4 8.54432989691 1198% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 125.0 8.15463917526 1533% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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