You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very
interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't
be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I saw your brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains at my friend’s place. I got so
excited when I view it because I’ve never been on such a tour and I would love to go one. I have
always wanted to go on a trek but due to some reason or the other I was never able to go on one.
I request you to share the dates and prices of the tours. In addition to that, please share the number
of people going on the trip. Are there any other activities that we are going to do on this tour? I’ve
heard that on such trips, we have to wear shoes specially made for walking purpose. If that is so,
please let me know so that I can buy it before the trip.
I would like to discuss one of my biggest fear with you. Since childhood, I’ve never been a fit kid and
till date, I’m underweight and lose my stamina quickly. I’m worried if I’ll be able to keep up with the
others and will be able to complete the tour or not. Is there anything that I should do before the
tour?
I look forward to your swift attention.
Yours faithfully,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...such a tour and I would love to go one. I have always wanted to go on a trek but...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...other I was never able to go on one. I request you to share the dates and pric...
^
Line 12, column 85, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
...ar with you. Since childhood, I've never been a fit kid and till date, I'm unde...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25821596244 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29680651177 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582159624413 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5803557482 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7857142857 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172426785775 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584600649535 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475148461812 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598098417043 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436595003112 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.