You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area In that letter explaining the problems suggesting ways to help the situation proposing a p

Essay topics:

You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems.

Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter

• explaining the problems

• suggesting ways to help the situation

• proposing a possible meeting

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Neighbours,

Dear Neighbors,

I am one of the beloved member of the community and writing to raise serious concern over parking space in our neighborhood.

There are few problems which are adversely affecting our society fellows. One of main issue is that several individuals are parking their vehicles inappropriately. Another minor problem is some people are littering in paring area instead of throwing garbage into the dust bin.

As one of the responsible person of society, honestly suggesting everyone to park their vehicles at designated spots. Regarding useless waste, I am kindly requesting all of the society members to certainly follow the procedures we were used to follow before.

Moreover, there are multiple other concerns related to our community which are affecting particular to us. Therefore, I am kindly proposing all of you to arrange a suitable meeting date which would appropriate to all members.

I hope my suggestions help everyone to tackle the current situation and please promptly respond to the possible meeting schedule.

Best Regards,
Kaushik Domadiya

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...g useless waste, I am kindly requesting all of the society members to certainly follow the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to following'.
Suggestion: used to following
...certainly follow the procedures we were used to follow before. Moreover, there are multiple...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, moreover, regarding, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4880952381 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89018591152 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672619047619 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1832254443 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156687685148 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530746967851 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326483468158 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779417545909 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305062488924 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 70.7449484536 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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