You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,
•introduce yourself
•explain what experience and special skills you have
•explain why you are interested in the job
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear director,
my name is Cuc Vo, I'm 20 years old. I have been studying in interpretation and translation at university. I have already started part-time job for 2 years since I graduated high school. Therefore, I'm writing to your museum to apply for the job that I have seen in newspaper, and I belive that I have enough experience to undertake this job.
As I mentioned above, I have experience to do part-time job for 2 years. During 2 years do part-time job, I gain many useful experience. I have learnt how to react any customers' behaviors. I have planned to parallel the work and personal problems. I also know the way to deal with many unexpected adversities. I am an English language study student, so I think I can take on this job well. I have a quite great communication skill, so that I can use both language skill and communication skill to instruct visiter well.Beside, I also study interpretation, so I belive that I can help your museum to interpret for most of foreigner.
I'm very interested in this job. I have already been curious about museum for a long time, so this is a great chance for me to fulfil my dream. Moreover, I can expand my knowledge through this experience, I will know more and more about British culture. Especially, I will have a practical environment work to practice my major.
I have already express all of my feelings and experience above. I hope you will consider my letter and give me a chance to prove my abilities. I am looking forward to your answer.
Kind regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear director, my name is Cuc Vo, Im 20 years old. I ha...
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... Dear director, my name is Cuc Vo, Im 20 years old. I have been studying in i...
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...nce I graduated high school. Therefore, Im writing to your museum to apply for the...
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...ough experience to undertake this job. As I mentioned above, I have experience ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much useful experience', 'a good deal of useful experience'.
Suggestion: much useful experience; a good deal of useful experience
...During 2 years do part-time job, I gain many useful experience. I have learnt how to react any custome...
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...arallel the work and personal problems. I also know the way to deal with many une...
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... deal with many unexpected adversities. I am an English language study student, s...
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...so I think I can take on this job well. I have a quite great communication skill,...
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...nication skill to instruct visiter well.Beside, I also study interpretation, so I beli...
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...um to interpret for most of foreigner. Im very interested in this job. I have a...
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Suggestion: I'm
...to interpret for most of foreigner. Im very interested in this job. I have alr...
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...environment work to practice my major. I have already express all of my feeling...
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...give me a chance to prove my abilities. I am looking forward to your answer. ...
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.... I am looking forward to your answer. Kind regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 272.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59558823529 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95137020258 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533088235294 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6932850718 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4444444444 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295228688781 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079811428951 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706395369737 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166538233368 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502341322957 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.