Dear Mr.Smith,
How are you doing? Hope you still remember me. We met during our plane journey from Hongkong to Beijing on July 15th and I was sitting next to you. I am writing this letter to express my interest for the job position you mentioned to me, in one of your restaurants in Chinatown of US.
As you are already aware that I'm not much satisfied with my role in my current organization, primarily because I am not getting any challenging role and the financial incentives are also not up to the industry standard. So I am looking for a better career prospect and professional growth now. I am open to relocate as well for my career growth. As you told me during our journey that the job satisfaction index in your company is very high due to good exposure and incentives, I would like to apply for the job position of HR Manager in your Chinatown restaurant.
I can speak 3 languages, English, Japanese and as a native of China with fluent Chinese. Thus I think that would be an advantage of mine. Moreover I had 10 years of relevant experience in personnel management. So, if you have any suitable job vacancy in any of your esteemed chain of restaurants, please consider me for the same.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Chuck
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, How are you doing? Hope you still r...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...of US. As you are already aware that Im not much satisfied with my role in my c...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... a native of China with fluent Chinese. Thus I think that would be an advantage of m...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ink that would be an advantage of mine. Moreover I had 10 years of relevant experience i...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ts, please consider me for the same. Im looking forward to hearing from you. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60964912281 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71690259499 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627192982456 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3303002281 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0714285714 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204245650599 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068318231255 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629881323335 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137376234879 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665567617978 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.