Dear Mr. Brown,
I am a regular customer and great admirer of your restaurant ambience and cuisine, but I got embarrassed during my recent visit to your place last monday. I am writing to complain about the worst experience I had at your restaurant.
It was my anniversary and I took my whole family for a dinner, I was really excited as I had always praised the quality and environment of your restaurant. We ordered soup followed by chicken and fish dishes, while ordering, I specially requested the waiter to keep the preparation minimum spicy. Firstly, the order took around one hour to be prepared and then it was totally bland and insipid. I called your service manager and asked him to taste and judge whether the dish is worth eating but he denied to do so and told me that they have hired a new chef and he is naive and didn't know how to cook the non-veg dishes. I was shocked to hear that and immediately we left the restaurant with all the bill paid. That was really a harrowing experience, neither I am going to visit again nor I would recommend to anyone.
I would suggest that you immediately assign the chefs as per their expertise and impart proper training to the newly hired employees as your restaurant's reputation is at the stake.
- You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter:» explain why you were at the restaurant» describe the problems» write 89
- Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibilities of teachers, while others think this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 78
- Science will soon make people live up to 100 or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Nowadays children spend more time playing computer games than doing sports. Why is it happening? Does it have a positive or negative effect on their development? 73
- Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied doing'.
Suggestion: denied doing
...whether the dish is worth eating but he denied to do so and told me that they have hired a n...
Line 5, column 579, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...ve hired a new chef and he is naive and didnt know how to cook the non-veg dishes. I ...
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...he stake. Thank you Mohit Gupta.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, really, so, then, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62173913043 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5870442075 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.196530142 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174134953303 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688861697235 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592250749175 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111762228148 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279570702072 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.