Dear sir/madam,
I am writing to enquire about the admission in IT course in your college. I was waiting for an answer of my last letter, which I had written one month ago. It was an enquiry about the fees and the requirements. But, till date, I did not get any reply.
My name is Suman and I have passed my senior secondary in mathematics and economics. I like to join IT course in your college which is going to start on August 25. Firstly, I want to confirm my eligibility for the course and also request you to send me the list of the required documents needed for the submission. I would be pleased if I get the contact details too.
It is my humbly appeal to you to inform me, as soon as possible, if there is still any possibility or seat available for me to join the course. Because, I have checked on the official website that there have been only one month two weeks left to start the academic year. Furthermore, I need to know the exact timing of the classes because , presently, I am working as a clerk and I have to plan to attend the classes.
Anticipating a favourable reply from your side.
Yours faithfully
suman
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut, till date, I did not get any reply. My name is Suman and I have passed my se...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is going to start on August 25. Firstly, I want to confirm my eligibility for the...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...at available for me to join the course. Because, I have checked on the official website...
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Line 7, column 339, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the exact timing of the classes because , presently, I am working as a clerk and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40566037736 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57934973021 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.684643065 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8461538462 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271069994462 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750554954345 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482170842093 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130699486587 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577933788483 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.