You work for a company and have recently decided to leave it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
– Tell him/her that you will leave the company.
– Explain what you learned while working for the company.
– Tell him/her what you liked about the company.
Dear Mr Zuckerburg,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I am resigning from my current position as Regional Business Manager in the
Altis division based at Toronto territory. My last day with this organization will be 31st January, 2021, so please consider this one month time as a mandatory notice period as mentioned in the appointment letter.
I must admit that I have learnt numerous vital lessons during my tenure with the Alkem laboratory limited. Moreover, an additional
key responsibilities of handling international clients have augmented my communication and negotiation skills which will benefit me in
the future.
Undoubtedly, the comfortable working environment and employee friendly culture are the key values of the firm which could be found hardly in any organization. Apart from this, the well-developed training sessions given to all team members always helps to uphill knowledge of the current market situation.
Kindly accept this letter and share further procedure as per company norms.
Yours faithfully,
Nirav Dave
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'January 2021'.
Suggestion: January 2021
...day with this organization will be 31st January, 2021, so please consider this one month time...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oratory limited. Moreover, an additional key responsibilities of handling interna...
^^^
Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'responsibility'?
Suggestion: responsibility
... limited. Moreover, an additional key responsibilities of handling international clients have ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56441717791 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0525772734 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.754601226994 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7149639853 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.375 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12363269159 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486334220287 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398212292476 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572950079061 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476580966478 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 70.7449484536 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 8.71597938144 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 7.59969072165 135% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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