You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• give details of the course
• say how the course would be useful
• explain how the company could help you do this course.
Dear Amit,
I have recently become aware about a program called Project Management Essentials at the company’s training portal. I am writing to seek your permission for taking this course offered by Project Management Institute, New Delhi and it starts on Wednesday, 24 March. There cost associated for this training is $1500, covering all the essential study material along-with the examination fee.
I believe that this program will help me to acquire greater efficiency in managing the multiple projects at any given particular time and will be highly beneficial for the company. After reading reviews from various sources I came to know that this program delivers a good value for organizations, who thrive to deliver value to its customers.
Therefore, for these reasons I am requesting you to grant me a paid leave of 5 days starting from 24 to 29 March to attend the program. I have checked with my other team members for their leave schedule, so far none of them has applied during this period. Moreover, I have delegated few non-critical tasks to my fellow team member Rahul for this duration. However, if required, I am fully available for any highly critical task during the evenings.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
Bhupender Pruthi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10849056604 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74291134668 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698113207547 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5189708799 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4545454545 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167848302216 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590568236284 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416462140752 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942744990601 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538866656803 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.