You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear sir or madam,
I would like to express my dissatisfaction about my HP printer, Model 2000KC, which I have purchased it recently from your company due to facilitating my occupation tasks at home.
As I am working on my own as a graphic designer, I need to be precise in applying a range of according to my customers’ preferences. As a result my up to date printer does not satisfy my needs in order to represent the authentic colors similar to the main designs on laptop. For extra information, the cartridge has been altered one week ago but the problem still persists.
Because of this dilemma, my clients have refused to hand in their designs ever since. Therefore, my job is at risk and I am going to lose my profession and authenticity in this career.
Since the guarantee of my device has not expired yet, I would therefore ask that you change my printer or address this issue as soon as possible.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Azin Rad
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ding to my customers' preferences. As a result my up to date printer does not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, still, then, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76571428571 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92398386327 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8507863178 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117674646372 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546949410614 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294839708288 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657447399637 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174952648835 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.