Some people Say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about practical solutions to enhance a healthful living. While there are benefits to expanding various pitches, I believe that further measures should be considered by people.
On the one hand, sports facilities that are easy-to-reach can be a great source of motivation for people. Having convenient accessibility alter people priorities to participate in their local sports centers regularly and encourage them to be preserved. For example, a 5-minute walk to a gym would fulfill people’s need without any worries about car-park or traffic congestion to get there. Also, the variety of sports can help people find more personal fulfillment by giving them insight into what sports they like. Thus, not only will there be any severe memories of PE at school, but there also be plenty of sports fields to choose, maybe you prefer to join in a swimming pool than a soccer team.
On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to increase public awareness about other issues of having a healthier life. Firstly, media and education campaigns about having well-being attitude play a vital role in people’s life. For example, the risks of smoking and alcohol consumption noticeably have been being enlightened people through mass media. Secondly, in a workplace, wellness programs and breaks for physical activities during work hours may bring about improvements. Finally, I believe that government legislation has become much more drastic in people’s lives. Ban on smoking in public places and increase taxes on tobacco products as well as economic incentives to make affordable healthy foods lead people to flourish their healthiness.
In conclusion, exercising is a striking part for having a healthy life, however, I believe that some schemes should be coming along to prove this notion.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36206896552 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84130607539 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662068965517 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8367133545 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.071428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179303145025 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611552835027 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508625858494 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103413905397 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225991614199 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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