You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
write a letter to your manager. In your latter
- explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months
- say how your work could be done while you are away
- ask for his/her help in arranging it.
Dear Mr. Patel,
I am a Team Leader of mobile team at Ahmedabad branch. I am writing this latter to request for visit a main branch for specific time period.
There is new project allocated to company's mobile department team which required relative hardware equipment. London branch have all the facilities regarding new project. So, for the research and understand the basic structure I need to go there for six months. All the task are regularly managing in 'Work Allocation' software, I will schedule all the task prior to my leave and allocate it to respective team members. Also, I will monitor it on regular basis.
To avail the facilities, we have to inform at London branch one month ago, so they can manage the time according project requirement. For that, we have to do meeting with the head of the London branch and I request your to explain whole situation.
Hoping for prompt and positive response from your side.
Your sincerely,
Kalpesh Sangani
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93902439024 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57703299323 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65243902439 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8189674439 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6363636364 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159405002579 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578248937092 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502489759877 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897244017068 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159061323528 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.