During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
- remind him when and where you met.
- tell him what kind of job you are interested in
- say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Patel,
It was a great meeting with you in the Indigo Airlines flight on the way to Ahmedabad on 15th Aug, 2019. You offered me the job opportunity in one of your restaurants. I am writing this letter to provide my information regarding approptiate vacancy.
I was a premium time with you when we are on the same flight from London to Ahmedabad. My place was just beside you, and we exchanged lots of information of our-self. You introduced about your restaurant business and its franchies over many wel-known locations. I also shared my education qualification and experience in the same field. As I have a degree of 'Master of Hospitality Management' and currently working in one of the five start hotels as a manager. I prefer to apply for the senior manager in any of your restaurant branch.
I have eight years of good experience in restaurant sector. I have excelent skill to manage the staff and restaurant. So, I think the position of senior manager is suitable for me.
Hoping for a positive response from your-end.
Yours Faithfully,
Kalpesh Sangani
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f good experience in restaurant sector. I have excelent skill to manage the staff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83695652174 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8990375497 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4365066477 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.5714285714 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168983087961 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556679278895 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697167422168 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914969867946 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860843124268 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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