The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems...so who do u think
should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organisation or each individual?
Adverse effects of global warming are seen in form of depletion of ozone layer and climate change has led to
increase in the rate of disasters. Uneven rainfall, cyclones, droughts, heat and cold waves have affected the
lives of people in several ways. We cannot blame or make one entity responsible to solve the issues of
environment. Working as a team we can achieve more. However, government can legislate and enforce the
environment friendly behaviour of individuals and organisations by law.
For example, gas and electricity which is usually provided by government must be produced using renewable
sources of energy such as solar and hydro power. Further stricter laws must be enforced to reduce the
emissions from industries and discarding toxic waste in a nature friendly manner. Government must ensure
that students in schools and universities understand the threat possessed by increasing pollution and are
encouraged to use recyclable products. Moreover, more funds must be spent in R&D to reduce toxic waste.
Furthermore, organisations and government together can introduce programs where they plant trees.
However, making laws is just one part of the coin –execution is even more important.
Such vast scale initiatives cannot be completed by an entity in itself. In my opinion, I believe governments,
organisations and individuals are equally responsible to solve the problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, so, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52534562212 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02090516851 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663594470046 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7915928138 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2307692308 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164530122432 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573747526722 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640077417814 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586580792184 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756557668119 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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