You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it,
Dear Mr Harris,
I hope this letter finds you well, As the previous session about founding new branch in UK, finally the head officer decided to choose me as our international company's head for six months to train employees whom are going to serve public.Besides, As you are quietly aware that VMware corporation is planning to organize a new meeting there and I am considering it is a fascinating chance for me to be able to joing that meeting.
Furthermore, eventualy I had trained one of my best sub-employee for replacing during this 6 months.
Her name is Sara Anderson whom I fully trust. she is hard-working stuff and she could be an appropriate remedy. Since my the exit time is at the end of this weekend and I am run out of time, I appeal you to help me for arranging my plans and guide me how to be a proficient head officer. Your asisstance in this matter is greatly appriciated.
Your Sincerely,
Chi Chung.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...mployees whom are going to serve public.Besides, As you are quietly aware that VMware c...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...me is Sara Anderson whom I fully trust. she is hard-working stuff and she could be ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, furthermore, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61445783133 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89103910857 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674698795181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.821945966 44.8134815571 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247032214222 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861345419611 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594038056728 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128306891582 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719288794072 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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