You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Mrs Collin,
I am writing this letter with regarding to your rejection of my application which was going to begin postgraduate studies in software science at your university on 24th August. As you indicated that my IELTS band score is insufficient and I would require a minimum of 6.5 to gain admission. Whereas I recognize the importance of ensuring the english competency of enrolling overseas candidates and entirely consent your decision, a friend of mine currently is studying at your institution, have suggested that it might be possible to take a two-month, pre-sessional english course and then either take an internal examination or resit IELTS prior to the beginning of the semester as this is what she told.
Hence, I’m confused what to do, , I was wondering if you could send me further information on any such courses or any other possible means of gaining entrance to your master of software science programme. I can be contacted at the address and phone number supplied. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Your sincerely,
Chi Gu
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the semester as this is what she told. Hence, I'm confused what to do, , I...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Hence, I'm confused what to do, , I was wondering if you could send me fu...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this matter is greatly appreciated. Your sincerely, Chi Gu
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Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iated. Your sincerely, Chi Gu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15254237288 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99053761688 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689265536723 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.045624327 44.8134815571 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.285714286 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167368279673 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732869947201 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444998642851 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119635825922 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299060268224 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 8.37731958763 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.