Increasing travels between countries enable people to learn different cultures or to increase tension between people from different countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
while some people believe trips are increased among countries and it give this opportunity to people to learn various culture and rituals, other contend traveling increase the struggle between nations.
I disagree with the second view because it brings benefits for both tourists and local people.
On the one hand, a good reason that why international travels don’t increase conflicts for locality is that, firstly, it benefits both visitors and locals in economic way. The international investors make many job opportunities for habitant. also, the entrepreneurs benefits by expanding their business to worldwide. The more branches, The more money. beside that, the international market will bring more wealth as it will provide new careers. For example, The KFC restaurant chain which has many branches through worldwide. also, being familiar with others culture, their religions or the social background and also their language may provide a better understanding of host country and may be collected as an useful book for other foreigner to guide them how to respect the locality while their enjoying their trip. such as, the book “The culture of Persians” which is eminent in many countries. Since it teaches different parts of Iranian’s culture to global population. Furthermore, traveling to other spots of the world will make tourists familiar with different ingredient of foods
On the other hand, some people contend traveling to abroad bring nothing but serious consequences for local people. they deny the benefits of international trips due to social unrest that may tourist brings to locality. The new outlook to world will break many social memes and rituals by especially juveniles. such as, “the day of death” which is a popular ceremony among Mexican people and is merged with “Halloween Day” in the same period of time. beside that, the other consequence is around the local environment where may be the fauna for many species. Sometimes, tourists seems are irresponsible about the host’s country and they tend to taint various sightseeing and this immature behavior and local people can’t endure it. Of course by running intense fees these kind of challenge would be disappear.
To conclude, Although some tourists will not act as suitable as they should in a foreign country, I agree with the view that tourists benefits both local people and foreigners.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, so, while, for example, kind of, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45382585752 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85267351561 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543535620053 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0965615595 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.789473684 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175944612106 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507175291812 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835105496344 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131096478556 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117378927059 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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