You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Mr. Roberts,
I am writing to ask for your permission to work in our head office in Chicago for six months. If you receive the email Sarah, our Human Resource manager, sent to us last Friday, you would know that there is a six month position open to internal employees to assist with a project that will involve a large work load. As we known, our office has been working closely with the head office on several project. Since it is not our peak time at the time of this year, I think I should be able to help out with the project in the head office. Not only could we further keep a stronger bond with them, but also it is a great opportunity for me learn from others working in the head office. When I am back, I could also share what I learn with our coworker.
If I could have the opportunity, Jake, the team lead of research group will cover my work while I am away. But beyond that, we will keep in touch with each other on a daily basis to ensure that things are going well.
I greatly appreciate if you could touch base with the project lead in the head office to schedule the most appropriate timing for me to start.
Thank you for your time and consideration and I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours sincerely,
Amanda Hardy
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Roberts, I am writing to ask for your permission ...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'knew'?
Suggestion: knew
...t will involve a large work load. As we known, our office has been working closely wi...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun project seems to be countable; consider using: 'several projects'.
Suggestion: several projects
...working closely with the head office on several project. Since it is not our peak time at the t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39075630252 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23169372644 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579831932773 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4489411314 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298295606054 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116492848644 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907582428386 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160615207649 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899959356421 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.