You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a familyfor six months and look after their six- year-old child.Write a letter to the parents. In your letter- Explain why you would like the job- give details of why you wo

Essay topics:

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family

for six months and look after their six- year-old child.

Write a letter to the parents. In your letter

- Explain why you would like the job

- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ

- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position that is posted in the latest issue of Australian Daily.

To accompany my husband who was recently allocated to Australia for a project, our family just moved to here a couple days ago. In order to fill in my spare time, I am currently looking for a job in the local community to make better use of my time.

With a bachelor degree in Early Childhood Education, I started my career as a teacher assistant in a local Kindergarten, where I've spend 3 years working with children at the age of 3 to 5. I am able to get to know about each child very quickly, and become friend with them. I was commented as hardworking, patient, and energetic, which are some of the most essential qualities working with children.

Outside of work, I would love to take some time exploring the city and visiting the museums. I know there are some conservation areas not far that are worth going.

Thank you for your time reading my letter. Please feel free to contact me via email@gmail.com or 123-456-789. I look forward to your response.

Yours faithfully,

Alan Roberts

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ssistant in a local Kindergarten, where Ive spend 3 years working with children at ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73128175039 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3646505928 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126384511761 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475083911273 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055291529386 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621616946747 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441750920279 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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