You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family
for six months and look after their six- year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for the job of caretaking a children, the advert for which I came across in a magazine. I enclose my CV for your perusal.
To begin with, I am Sam Roberts and I am 23 years old, currently pursuing graduation in marine biology. If in case, I do get the job I would be safe significant amount from earnings for my next semester fees. Additionally, I am also eager to see Australia as I have never been there.
I am wonderful with kids. I am excited to spend time with the little one's and so do they as I am very joyful and would love to play with them all day long. I have also experience working as a primary school teacher for 2 years so I have the required skills to help them with their school-work and train them to do be better at doing daily-life activities.
As I mentioned, previously, I have never been to Australia so eagerly excited to be there. I am extremely keen on seeing the Australian outskirts, spending time both on beaches and deserts.
I look forward to hearing from you. If you need any further information, Please do not hesitate to email me on: email@example.com
- Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there is more advantages to living in an apartment.Are there more advantages or disadvantages of living in a house compared to living in an apartment. 78
- Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and 78
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Many people like to wear fashionable clothes.Why do you think this is the case?Is this a good thing or a bad thing? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: A_PLURAL
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...tter to apply for the job of caretaking a children, the advert for which I came across in ...
Line 13, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ld love to play with them all day long. I have also experience working as a prima...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5787037037 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89367164664 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.921919082 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4166666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155270046344 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586449716837 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338422587211 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840884826132 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312322738807 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.