You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a familyfor six months and look after their six- year-old child.Write a letter to the parents. In your letter- Explain why you would like the job- give details of why you wo

Essay topics:

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family

for six months and look after their six- year-old child.

Write a letter to the parents. In your letter

- Explain why you would like the job

- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ

- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter to apply for the job of caretaking a children, the advert for which I came across in a magazine. I enclose my CV for your perusal.

To begin with, I am Sam Roberts and I am 23 years old, currently pursuing graduation in marine biology. If in case, I do get the job I would be safe significant amount from earnings for my next semester fees. Additionally, I am also eager to see Australia as I have never been there.

I am wonderful with kids. I am excited to spend time with the little one's and so do they as I am very joyful and would love to play with them all day long. I have also experience working as a primary school teacher for 2 years so I have the required skills to help them with their school-work and train them to do be better at doing daily-life activities.

As I mentioned, previously, I have never been to Australia so eagerly excited to be there. I am extremely keen on seeing the Australian outskirts, spending time both on beaches and deserts.

I look forward to hearing from you. If you need any further information, Please do not hesitate to email me on: samroberts@gmail.com

Yours faithfully,

Sam Roberts

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...tter to apply for the job of caretaking a children, the advert for which I came across in ...
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Line 13, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ld love to play with them all day long. I have also experience working as a prima...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5787037037 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89367164664 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.921919082 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4166666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155270046344 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586449716837 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338422587211 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840884826132 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312322738807 0.0580467560999 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.