You work for an international company. Recently your job has changed and you believe that more training is needed. Write a letter to your manager and say
- How has your job changed?
- Describe a type of training you will need.
- Suggest the arrangements incorporating training and your work.
Dear Mr. Phan,
I am writing this letter to request a training for dealing with some changes in my job recently.
As you have known, our office has received more orders to create online stores with appealing homepages and an organized payment system. As my team members are specialized in making blogs with minimal design requests from customers, we do not have innovative ideas for building attractive websites. Therefore, it is very importance for me to take a training to help my team provide the best to our valued customers.
A web design course will surely equip me with knowledge of how to create a catchy and beautiful front page for online stores. I believe there is such a 3-month course organized in Ho Chi Minh city headquarter. With the instruction of professionals from UK and experience of the seniors, my designing skill will definitely improve.
As for my absence when taking the training, I suggest that our office organizes online meetings once a week to ensure that I keep track of the office’s work and finish my task when I am away. If necessary, I can book a flight to participate in any importance meeting in person.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Truong Nguyen
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 56, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: creating
...wn, our office has received more orders to create online stores with appealing homepages ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 359, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: helping
...ry importance for me to take a training to help my team provide the best to our valued ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18660287081 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82711559498 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66985645933 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6497626111 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5454545455 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177582906419 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645044920274 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528416318293 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972686464143 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605687817271 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.