You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
- describe the training course you want to do
- explain what the company could do to help you
- say how the course will be useful for your job.
Begin with Sir or Madame,
At least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Jon Smith,
I am writing this quick letter to describe my interest in one of the online course I have seen on the internet and I am keen to do that.
The online course is the certification about professional communication in the corporate world for the duration of a year offered by Stanford University. In addition, as it is the online course, I don't need to take off work. it can be completed with the dedication of five to six hours a week which wouldn't be a hindrance to my daily work.
company can also help me to prioritize my profile during selection by sponsoring me for the course. Moreover, I would like to make a small request about taking a week off during exam time if it's not affecting my routine.
As this course is about the communication skills, it will be proven helpful whenever I go outside to represent the company and for the presentation. To add more, with the help of this certification, I will be able to conduct small sessions regarding communication skills inside the company for employees.
I would love to complete this certification and I assure you that it will not degrade my work at all. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Let me know in case of any further information.
Yours Sincerely,
Jaimin
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ts not affecting my routine. As this course is about the communicatio...
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...e the company for employees. I would love to complete this certificat...
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...formation. Yours Sincerely, Jaimin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80357142857 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8892034908 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584821428571 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3937407963 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234001096219 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762848699749 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459317569641 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108848968308 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373180077933 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.