Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for the community, should always be taken into account when deciding the punishment.
Discuss both of these views & give your own opinion.
Are both the mugging and murder the same? If I do a small crime unintentionally and commit ten accountable felonies, will I get the same punishment for both? The jurisdiction department of the country has one of the most essential duty to perform and its decisions are considered as the final ones. Therefore, with such a responsibility, it cannot make the ad-hoc or fixed decision for everyone. This essay discusses why the circumstances and the reason for the commitment of a crime must be taken into account while declaring a decision. Also, provide the reason for the fixed punishment failure.
The fixed sentence for each felon is equivalent to all the crimes are equal whatever it is either a traffic rule break or a murder. For example, a small street thief will also be equal to a rapist and he/she will get a sentence to death. This can be an obvious bias with a person who committed a minor crime by mistake or unintentionally. Moreover, it might motivate people to commit terrific crimes. In such a system, a person who breaks the traffic law would be inspired to kill his enemy because, in the end, he will get the same decision. Therefore, fixed punishment would never work in terms of crime for any country.
On the other hand, the circumstances in which a crime happened and the inspiration behind the fact of crime must be given a priority while making a decision. For instance, an unintentional or accidental crime should have lower seriousness rather than a planned one. Likewise, the situation of a person whether he/she was motivated by the enemy or not should also be accounted for. To add more, sometimes people become a passive member in the crime such as give money to a professional killer to do their task. In such cases, both are equal and must be given the same sentence irrespective of their dignity in the community.
In conclusion, I think that instead of being equal for all the felons and declare the same result for everyone, a thorough analysis of the status of affairs of individuals, motivation which made such situation and the membership of each and every person connected with it must be done prior to declaring any result. At last, it’s the decision about someone’s life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 937.175257732 197% => OK
No of words: 384.0 206.0 186% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80989583333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 3.78020617076 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86029982767 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 127.690721649 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 290.88556701 207% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.729518129 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2105263158 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 1.49484536082 870% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358551979542 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110001437903 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709848120694 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221534912866 0.12726935374 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614546016441 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 41.2886597938 208% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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