You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter,
describe the training course that you want to do
explain what the company could do to help you
say how the course will be useful for your job
You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter,
describe the training course that you want to do
explain what the company could do to help you
say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about a training course which I would like to take.
The course is called "Laboratory Information Management System" and it is due to start at the first day of next month. As you know, I currently supervise the quality control labs in the company. The program is designed to teach laboratory managers how to construct an elaborate database for everything connected to the lab whether it is chemicals, instrument files, calibration data and even personnel.
In order to attend the course, I would like to request written permission to leave work an hour early for a month. Naturally, I will make up the tine after I am done with the training. Also, I would like to be given access to a number of databases in order to do my final research project to get my certificate at the end of the training.
Such program will be highly beneficial for the entire company. Since designing a database that will connect the laboratories with the different departments that are concerned with quality control. Moreover, it will make the labs operate more efficiently and with a higher degree of organization.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Your faithfully
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ghly beneficial for the entire company. Since designing a database that will connect ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87191164422 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549242424242 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4826011967 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.579320350912 0.216113520407 268% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188875650881 0.0766984524023 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.214399085377 0.0603063233224 356% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265033323388 0.12726935374 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203923729765 0.0580467560999 351% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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