In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
The world has become a small village where every corner of the planet is being photographed or recorded on TV. Modern day affairs are broadcasted live on dozens of TV channels or published in daily newspapers. However, the younger generations do not seem to follow the news as closely as the older one. The causes of that notion will be discussed in some detail and some proposed solutions will also be presented in this essay.
The main reason why so many teenagers and young adults do not follow the news is that they find it depressing and boring as well. Not only do the news contain images of families devastated from war or even natural disasters are very upsetting, but it also present political topics or debates that most likely do not interest the younger population. Another reason is the fact that major news outlets such as TV or newspapers are no longer relatable to teenagers who spend the majority of their time on their phones or on social media. These methods of delivery are
However, these cause can be counteracted by some simple solutions. The first of which if to present the news in shorter formats that can be delivered through messages or mobile phone applications. The second of which is to open a daily discussion in classroom at schools to present updates on major events that are happening in all the world. It will prove highly beneficial if every university also had its own newspaper in order to spread awareness of universal issues.
Despite the importance of knowing the current affairs of the different countries in the world, young people do not seem to grasp the concept of reading newspapers or watching TV news shows. While the method of delivery and the depressing content might one the causes of their indifference, some steps can be taken to increase their level of awareness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, while, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82484076433 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60859909548 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4368106668 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20829719124 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681101105646 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485636181796 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123208594124 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373373531706 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.