You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir
I am writing this letter to inform to you about my willingness to take up the PMP Certification course offered by simpliem academy I came across this advert while scrolling through my Linkedin page and was eager to receive training in project management expertise
The training course consists of modules that focus mainly on managenal skills. The duration of this course is
mere 11 months. It offers a long distance learning facility and thus allowing me to work and study at the same
time. However the cost of the program is Rs 50, 000 and I wanted to request the company to provide me with
sponsorship for the same
This certification course will help me to develop my capabilities as a manager which ultimately benefits our organization Moreover, I assure you that my current working hours will not be compromised On the contrary because of this course I would be able to give more updated inputs in my job role
I hope that you will consider my sincere request and do the needful
Yours faithfully
Rachana Patel
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88268156425 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68541390338 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670391061453 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 179.0 16.3608247423 1094% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 874.0 76.5299724578 1142% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 179.0 16.8248392259 1064% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 55.0 4.34317383033 1266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265345679458 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.265345679458 0.0766984524023 346% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102425544255 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450906373755 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 91.1 8.37731958763 1087% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -101.75 70.7449484536 -144% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 71.9 7.45979381443 964% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.01 7.59969072165 224% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 8.62886597938 649% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 73.6 8.54432989691 861% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 8.15463917526 687% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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