You work for an international company. You want to attend special family celebration during working hours. You need to take time off work for this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
- Give details of family celebration
- Tell your manager how much time time off work you need
- Suggest how work can be done while you attend the celebration
Dear Mr. Suju,
I am writing the letter to ask you to please help me because I want attend my family celebration in Brampton.
My sister is getting engage on Wednesday (March 20th) and family want me there at my father home for the function. Her wedding is next month in India and I am not go to the wedding so I want to be with sister for her engagement function. I want leave on Wednesday as we have many things to do at the home.
My schedule for Wednesday is in the evening shift and I already spoke to Ms. Shami and she is going to do my shift job. She suppose to join after her holiday on the 21st but for me she do favour and join on 20th and replace me for my shift.
So, please give me holiday to go for my sister function on the Wednesday. Since you have week off you can also come for the function.
Yours sincerely,
Tinku Sharma
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Suju, I am writing the letter to ask you to pl...
^^^
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...ing is next month in India and I am not go to the wedding so I want to be with sis...
^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'supposes'.
Suggestion: supposes
...nd she is going to do my shift job. She suppose to join after her holiday on the 21st b...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... her holiday on the 21st but for me she do favour and join on 20th and replace me ...
^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome for the function. Yours sincerely, Tinku Sharma
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.07784431138 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20911830026 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532934131737 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.53032773 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181947296411 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868984659311 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652121380545 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131536428631 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076323492415 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.04 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.