You work a part-time job in a company and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full-time position. Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position. In your letter say
– Why do you want to apply?
– What are your future goals?
– Why would it be beneficial for the company?
Dear sir/ madam,
I"Mehwish munir" am writing to show my interest in the full-time position of Senior Radiographer advertised on last Monday in Newspaper. I would like to apply for this role as its requirements are really in-line with my experience in radiography.
I have been working in this company as a part time worker in Radiology Department since february 2020 and now I want to turn it into a full-time place. Because I have a vast experience in this field, I have recently completed my evening masters programme in this field that actually offer me an opportunity to apply for this role.my spare evening time now has provided me enough chance to work in full-time position.
Besides that I remain a feisty person in my career and I want to nourish my skills in your institution that provides me enough chance to excel in radiography. After attaining this position, I can assure that I will proof a successful research scientist as I have gained extensive knowledge in this respect during my specialization.
my expertise in this field will be a true asset to your company, as current need of the scientists will definitely raise the performance of our organization in the field of research. The upcoming research project seems to be more challenging and it requires more cautious efforts for its completion. I, with my up-to-date research experience will create a significant impact on this challenging research programme. Hope you will definitely consider my application for the said vacancy.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mehwish
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...sir/ madam, I'Mehwish munir' am writing to show my interest in the full...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne with my experience in radiography. I have been working in this company as a...
^^^
Line 4, column 42, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... have been working in this company as a part time worker in Radiology Department since fe...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...is respect during my specialization. my expertise in this field will be a true ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15444015444 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0735821886 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8681367263 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200335118271 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771320799583 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497878310565 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997506900654 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480108244733 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.