Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
it is said that leaning history as a subject is nothing but waste of time. However, others believe that it should be learnt. In my opinion, I would suggest that history depicts culture of a nation. In this essay I will discuss both view points and state my opinion.
Firstly, by knowing the history, someone can develop to learn the culture of society. For instance, if a tourist wants to explore the world it is worthwhile for him to learn the history of that place. it is a source of information about diversity of culture in this world. Otherwise, many cultures would be obsolete due to lack of knowledge and research in those area. Secondly, by knowing the norms and values, someone can get a knowledge of the culture, history, and society.
On the other hand, some believe that it is waste of time because something that happens in the past was over. it has no linkage with today's society and even those people if have a chance to relook in today's world. They would be amazed by new technology and would believe that its a magical world beyond the reality. Moreover, it would be above their thoughts and ideas, how people are surviving in this modern world?
to sum up, if I had my choice i would suggest that history has an impactful approach on today's society. No nation can live without knowing their culture and those nations would ruin themselves who forgot their past. it is highly recommended to learn the history in order to alive our ancestors a norm and values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62878787879 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3885511859 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.5029558449 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.375 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176153311022 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062382834013 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606351796247 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117260404077 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815607749268 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.