You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Vinod Chauhan, living in the province of haryana in India. I am currently working as Senior Software Engineer here. I have learned through a promotion about the seminar on big data, scheduled to be in held in sydney, Australia in december. I am writing to get some details from you about this mammoth seminar as I am planning to attend it without any procrastination.
First of all, please share seminar dates as this one are of paramount importance. I would also want to know about the timings of workshop, for example, if it going to be a full day activity or meager hours are defined. i would be glad if you could let me know the details of speakers who are going to impart their valuable and lucrative knowledge with us. Next thing I would like to know about the accomodation. Would it be included in your amenities or I have to arrange it by myself. Lastly, please share the cost of all these as it would be the momentous factor decide upon.
Thank you in advance for reply. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours' truly,
Vinod Chauhan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... held in sydney, Australia in december. I am writing to get some details from you...
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Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...y activity or meager hours are defined. i would be glad if you could let me know ...
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Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y activity or meager hours are defined. i would be glad if you could let me know ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, look, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51776649746 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56336633521 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6330774813 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4615384615 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177579037098 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580883816381 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354790906156 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114765664226 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014942549824 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.