You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inquire some information about the seminar that is scheduled by your organization in London October 2020. I am planning to attend and I need further detail.
First of all, I would like to be aware of the exact date of symposium. Since I am not living in your country, tickets should be booked in advance, therefore the exact date is essential. Moreover, I would be glad, if you could give me a brief of program like which aspects of veterinary will be discussed or who have been invited as the lecturers? Furthermore, as I have heard specific facility for accommodation is prepared by your company. If not, could you offer me the closest hotels and the best way for transportation? Finally, although I search about expenses I could not find any information. So please explain how much should be paid and when is deadline date?
I am waiting to hearing your kind reply.
Sincerely Yours
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing your kind reply. Sincerely Yours
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75776397516 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83374159578 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664596273292 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4858918392 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139407141734 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437866453056 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039096915856 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772164242438 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551149443022 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.