Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
It is believed that celebrities gain six figures salaries which is higher than norm in almost countries. I suppose this is unfair. This issue will be analyzed in this assay.
Advocates suppose that regarding to stars are symbol of a country's culture, especially international stars, and folk's life style are reflected by those, wearing valuable garments and having luxurious accommodation will promote a nation's culture. For instance, international festivals are broadcasted in around the world, therefore it is necessary to how they participate that is need to having high salary. Moreover, based on they are known by majority and are a behavior model particularly for teenagers, choosing occupation has been limited for them. For example, a normal man can work as a driver to make money, which is not possible for a celebrity as a known person.
On the other hand, naysayers argue that if earing money is not based on academic level or suffering from strong job, regularity will be districted in a society. They suppose there are many occupations that work stronger and earn lesser. Furthermore, as it is mentioned the most celebrities are followed by younger, so many of them will expect to have a luxurious life while it is not possible.
Personally, I believe there are many occupations that have a vital role in people's life and they should be motivated by high income. For example, if an architecture don’t be satisfied by how much he/she earns may lead to not having concentrate on subject and design a house which has many defects.
All in all, in a successful nation people individuals must live in a justly situation which is need accurate management in every parts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('justly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('situation') instead of another adjective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03214285714 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89888921373 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596428571429 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5016924951 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115700972074 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379149440813 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349160157939 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614708042247 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265418072674 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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