Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
In your letter:
when and where you hired it
describe how the accident happened
what kind of action did you take after the accident
I am writing this letter to inform you about an accident that took place last night. I had rented a car, Honda City, from your company's showroom located at F-7 sector of Islamabad. I had rented the car on 25th of this month for the period of 10 days.
I had hired the car for a family visit to north of Pakistan, I was having a very smooth and flawless experience with your car. However, unfortunately, I have encountered a small accident when I was driving back to the hotel. Actually, I was waiting at the red traffic signal when a car approaching me at the higher speed hit my car from behind. As the car slowed down a little before hitting so it has not damaged a lot. The bumper has a dent and a piece of back light in also partially broken.
After the incident, I was able to get the required support from the police department as they reached at the spot with in few minutes. Police has given me an accident report mentioning that it was the mistake of other party so he will be making arrangements for the repair. The driver, who was driving the other car has also agreed to pay for all the expenses. I am attaching police report with this letter for your reference. Kindly arrange a replacement car for me as this car is not fit for further travel.
Your faithfully,
Bilal Ahmed
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f this month for the period of 10 days. I am wrting this letter to inform you abo...
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Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: YESTERDAY_NIGHT[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'last night' is used.
Suggestion: last night
... about a small accident that took place yesterday night. I had rented the car for a family ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt that took place yesterday night. I had rented the car for a family visit t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41228070175 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47559649863 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3318919397 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3846153846 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218364756296 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731582195816 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519049374363 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141099667391 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424030682948 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.