In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old peoples where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who should be responsible for our old people?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Humans need special care when they grow up to the older age. In the recent past, it has been observed that elder people tend to live with their peers in centers designated for the senior residents. At times, governements have to afford their living. I believe it is a joint responsibility of family and state.
It is a matter of fact that senior family members require more attention and support. They have earned this by supporting their families or kids when they were younger. However, with this fast moving and busy world, it is sometimes not possible for the family members to give them required time. However, it is still the responsibility of the family to pay back to their elder family members by supporting financially and by being kind with them. In the older age, it is quite essential to have love and respect from your younger members of family.
On the other hand, it is also a responsibility of state to offer due support for the senior citizens. Most of the people pay tax for their whole professional career and they profoundly deserve a return. Even if they are living with their families, state should offer a handsome amount of pension for everyone above the age of 65. This will bring sense of independence amongst them, and they will continue to play their positive part in the society.
In the conclusion, I would argue that it has been witnessed that the elder people tend to live in specialized centers where they are being provided with the due care from the staff. In some cases, government is funding these centers. However, I believe it is the combine responsibility of family members and the govenments to make sure the well being of elder members of society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, well, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74324324324 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57051750878 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3898381917 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2507207447 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827760998807 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054142386794 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158404180428 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329911292995 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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