Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday you have a small accident You will have to write a report to the company to explain it You need to explain the following when and where you hired it Describe how the accident happened W

Essay topics:

Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. You need to explain the following: when and where you hired it? Describe how the accident happened? What kind of action did you take after the accident?

Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the car condition which I have hired from your company.

To begin with, I have rented a car model Brio of Honda brand from your branch called Uber auto rental service which is located in the east of the intersection of airport road and main road. I have hired this car on 1st June for three days. The car number is GJ27 AP2727 and it is diesel engine.

When I was driving to explore the heritage of Ahmedabad city, I was stuck in the traffic on Relief road. But, a car driver, who was driving behind me lost his control over staring and collide with my car. Because of this, my car got up speed and met with an accident with another car.

With respect to this accident, complain has been registered by me to the nearest police station. Thereby, cops came at place where the accident happened and check the seriousness of this accident. Furthermore, I called to the insurance agent and sent him a captured photographs. So that, you company can claim a service from insurance company.

I apologize for this incident. But, feel free to ask me if you need any further information. Please co-ordinate me on +91-9090807657 for any details.

Yours sincerely,
Kajal Desai

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, to begin with, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66363636364 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53390235744 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0585884708 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226004461092 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651866070706 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615309830933 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115667923419 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380421714954 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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