People who go to live in other countries, should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is important to consider that whether immigrants should follow the ethics and manners of the host country or not. I completely agree with the statement that they should respect them. In this essay I will explain my view with examples.
To begin with, culture and tradition should be adopted by people who migrates in other countries in order to mingle with local residents. The reason for this is that trust can be developed between locals and them if they adopt and respect their manners. To illustrate, a person who is amicable and respectful towards the host country, may invited to social programs and festivals. As a result, he or she can get opportunity to meet and understand native people whereas one who is disrespectful, is considered as menace to society whereby he or she has to grapple to settle in the foreign countries. Therefore, for development of social groups and relationships, virtues should be followed by them.
Furthermore, to grab job opportunity in the foreign countries, knowledge of their local manners and traditions is crucial. This is because the host countries are more populated with local people than foreigners and most of the time they need to communicate with native people. So, in order to get front desk job, they need to have in-depth understanding of local's culture and tradition. In contrast, if learning of regional language and habits are offend by them and not shows respect while communication, may not get well-paid job in their country. To clarify, some lucrative job position such as administrator or carer need to have a knowledge of customs and ethics of new country where they migrates.
In conclusion, while staying in other countries, customs and traditions should be followed by people who go to live in other countries. In my opinion to develop a social network and to get well-remunerated job, people should imbibe positivity and culture that the local country exudes.
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Suggestion: migrate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89497814111 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50625 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.328057608 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23811475744 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855260552413 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113714897871 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169696892767 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112703932363 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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