You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to request a reference letter for a job I am applying for.
To begin with, there is a job opening in Ahmadabad based IT company for the post of embedded engineer. The name of this firm is Silcore Technology. I want to apply for this job position which responsibilities entails understanding the requirements of clients, hardware design, firmware development and ensuring that the product will be ready before deadline.
With respect to these responsibilities, this job is crucial for me as it can enhance my job opportunity in future. Additionally this position is related to my passion and interest that I can not miss it. Furthermore, at this time I am undergoing from some financial crisis. So, money that I earn will help me to cope with this situation.
In the reference letter, employer need my university name, address and telephone number to be printed on letterhead along with my name and enrollment details. Furthermore, at the end of the letter, university stamp and your signature is needed. Also, you can mention my academics and achievements which can help me to prove myself in interview.
I would be grateful if you respond at your earliest. My enrollment number is 100727 and I am a student of 2009 pass out batch. Please coordinate on +91-6655889944 for any further detail.
Yours sincerely,
Kajal Desai
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir, I am writing this letter to request a re...
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...me as it can enhance my job opportunity in future. Additionally this position is related ...
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...n enhance my job opportunity in future. Additionally this position is related to my passion ...
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...any further detail. Yours sincerely, Kajal Desai
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...tail. Yours sincerely, Kajal Desai
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03493449782 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09379323913 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598253275109 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3318796754 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8666666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21021676782 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683247104845 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633713158264 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127547995541 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694453615741 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.