Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
It is important to consider the impact of artificial intelligence in people's lives, whether it is positive or negative. While many people think that effects will be good, others argue that this will affect badly if machines are more intelligent than humans. In this essay I will elaborate both sides of the argument and explain my support to the latter view.
On the one hand, it is commonly believed that productivity and efficiency will be achieved by using smart machines in the near future. The reason for this is that, by using artificial intelligence, computers and other machinery will be more organized and interactive which will help to reduce Manual labour spent. Additionally, despite of being tired and exhausted like humans, they will work for unlimited time. Thereby, they will be more productive and efficient, and will help companies to grow financially. To clarify, a company named Robo dish invented its own crockery and dish washer, and claim that, this machine can wash dirt, stains and germs that naked eyes can not wash. So, if this machine will use in hotels, it will replace manpower. As a result, this will benefited eateries in term of money.
On the other hand, my view is that if robots and computers will be smarter than humans, unemployment rate will be high. This is because workers job position will taken by them whereby this will create overwhelming job crisis. As a consequence, underprivileged population will increase which will hinders economy of the country and lead it to poverty. To illustrate, a mega warehouse of Amazon brand starts using robots for trolleys and segregate things, this reduce the number of workers in factories. Furthermore, they are also starting to use drones to deliver products which lowers the need of delivery boys.
In conclusion, it is widely accepted that advancement in the field of artificial intelligence will be helpful, in my notion we should worried about the worst side. If automatons will be more clever than humans, they will have negative effects in term of poverty and unemployment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
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Message: Did you mean 'take' or 'be taken'?
Suggestion: take; be taken
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 7.85571142285 318% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05847953216 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74970113501 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56432748538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3095966332 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.764705882 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251199655334 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906754341951 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619553524023 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1771288946 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469494213956 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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