You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter. say where you think you left the papers. explain why they are so impo

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter

. say where you think you left the papers
. explain why they are so important
. tell the manager what you want him to do

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention to some valuable papers which I forgot at your hotel because of my negligence when I attended a meeting that was held there, in the previous night. When I found I had left, I went far beyond the vicinity of the hotel.

To begin with, if I can recall, I waited in a reception area for more than 15 minutes after completion of a meeting for my colleagues. While waiting, I placed my belongings on the desk. So, there are some chances that you may find my documents there. Also, you may search my papers in the surrounding of table number ten, as we were seated there for a meeting.

These papers are important for me because one of these is a contract of a new project that is signed by all attendants. Thereby, this is proof of agreed terms and conditions. Other papers contain a portfolio of my customers and their feedbacks to the services of my company which took a long time to gather.

With respect to its importance, I want you to find them with the priority and let me know if you find them. So, I can give my address and courier should be done either on my office address or on my residential address.

I would be grateful if you respond at your earliest convenience. Please coordinate on +91-8535425678 for any details.

Yours sincerely,
Kamal Desai

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to draw your at...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, to begin with, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52479338843 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6370274301 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615702479339 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8880625622 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2142857143 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258801718787 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818731040946 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831974847129 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135515952983 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709209387205 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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